Please review first attempt at landing page

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Awesome feedback... That landing page look 1000% better... The light blue on white is a bit tough to read... i dont know if the 1px outline contributes to that... could just be my dry ass blitzed eyes from coding and never blinking... but other than that this landing page looks great...
 
Yes, darken the witing a bit, the lower half is brighter than the upper.
(Nothing wrong with dark blue or even #gasp# black)

and now for the fun part.... GOOOOO and see how it performs. Make monies!

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Or we could loose the drop shadow on the boxes and only do one for the button.

:)

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ArtDeco said:
Get Me Started Now!
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Great thread - and I think you improved it big time compared to the original.

To add to what ArtDeco said.

Maybe I'm just too old school -- but I'd like to make sure people know that bottom text is a definite link to be clicked.

Why not consider adding "underscore" to the text - or a straight link which will have the underscore automatically.

And maybe type, "Get Me Started Now!" - "Get Me Started Here!" or "Click Here to Get Going Now!" -- type of thing.


/2cents and good luck!
 
Page live today.

Just got to get it in front of the punters now.

Trying MSN Adcenter and Google. Clicks seem a little pricey but we'll have a go!!
 
Added the blue background as that matches the advertisers page.

Here it is http://tri-buy.com/bingojoy/lp6.png

Thanks to all those that gave their input to this.

I figure if I keep saying thanks I may be able to ask for help again in about two years time. Think I've used more than my fair share with this.

To all the noob lurkers, just have a go.
 
@maffs

To really say thanks, keep us updated.

What are you doing, how is your campaign going, etc..

That will teach some noobs and will help you as well, cause I know some people will chime in with helpful tips.

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BTW... the header looks bad with the blue background.

Maybe make it surrounded as well with blue, so it looks like a part of the BG?

Tried it here:
bingolp_03.jpg


Also, the text in your lower left box does not align (GAMES is too low)

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Google shafts me.

As I stated previously I have this running on MSN and Adwords. Or I should say had it running on adwords.

When I first looked into this I looked for competitor's ads for the major keywords and there were quite a few. Competition = moola in my book.

Well it turns out that with Google you can advertise Bingo but only with a gambling license. My Bad. Should have found that out. So they've disapproved my ads.

MSN have the campaign active but no impressions yet. I suspect this may go the same way.

Will try Yahoo later this week but only after checking their terms.

I do have a bookmaker friend and he may be agreeable to opening an account to get this thing running.
 
ArtDeco said:
That's a good attitude. A journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step.
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Making my way downtown
Walking fast
Faces passed
And I'm home bound

Staring blankly ahead
Just making my way
Making my way
Through the crowd

And I need you
And I miss you
And now I wonder....



ps , - good looking LP OP, good job :)
 
Nice job OP. Sucks that Google tenderly loved your campaign, but there are other ad networks out there.
 
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