It's cool that you produced something, but you should try relying a little bit less on the cliches inherent to the genre you are working in. Hits become hits because they sound like something nobody has ever heard before. There's an essential element of novelty to the music industry, and I think you are missing that here, because it sounds like you've just strung together a handful of the lowest-common-denominator rhythmic and melodic devices and called it a track. I'm not surprised that somebody wants to pay for it though, because people will pay for anything, but this isn't particularly interesting on any level. Keep trying though, emulation is just one rung on the ladder that leads to mastery.
Also, it's nice to Pewep out of the house and rapping again.