Thanks FlyingCake - looked into it and I'll be hitting up the chamber soon.
I've been sending email pitches, anyone care to critique one I've recently done?
Website:
Wholesale Automotive Machine Inc
Email:
Dear Dave, Brent, Jerry, or Lorena:
My name is NAME and I am a local web designer and developer. I assist San Diego businesses in bringing their company online, improving their online presence, or redesigning their current website to bring it to modern standards. I've just finished up a contract with a local machine shop - you can find their website at
Alex Machine | CNC Prototyping and Production Alex Machine Inc..
I came across your website at
WHOLESALE AUTOMOTIVE MACHINE INC. and noticed many areas that can be drastically improved to help your visitors navigate better and understand your company more fully.
Layout and Flow - Currently, your website has decent navigation, but the content is laid out sub optimally. I'd like to reorganize the content on each of your pages to present a visitor with the most relevant and important information about your company in the easiest way possible for them to understand.
Images - I'd like to improve the layout and functionality of the images on your website, especially with regards to the 'Services' page. Images help a visitor visualize the services or products a company offers - having them function properly and look beautiful is key to creating a positive impression of your business.
Design and Usability - Technology online moves extremely fast, and oftentimes something just five years old has been outpaced three times faster than it would have been if it was offline. The usability of your site could be improved with a redesign - things like adding space to the sides of the site and making sure it works on all modern browsers are critical for delivering the same content to everyone.
These are just some observations I've made after studying your website, but I would absolutely love to meet with you and discuss these in more detail. My phone number is (858) 248-9106 - please feel free to call anytime, or just reply to this email. Thanks so much for your time and I look forward to hearing from you!
Regards,