Review my LP......Ringtones Offer

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Im new to affiliate marketing and been reading a lot lately.
I made the decision to start my firts affiliate campaign and guess what, as a noob I decided for ringtones...... I know that most of members on this forums will say "Ringtones are death, or if you are a newbie you wont make any money with ringtones" so anyways, if there is so much competition its because people is making money with them. so I decided to give it a try.

So, I would love to hear from you guys any feedback and pointers you can give me on my first landing page for my ringtones offer; here it is:

Carl Smith Ringtones, Musica, Videos y Mas

Let me know what you guys think. Keep the pointers and feedback coming.

Thank you a lot guys!!!!
 


It's offcenter. The orange offer with the annoying red arrow needs to be shifted to the right.
 
1024x768
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Looks good, but as stated, offcenter.
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1680 x 1050
Firefox 2.0.0.13
AND IE 6.x
Win XP
 

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I read somewhere that moving/animated arrows do improve click rates on ringtone offers.....thats why Im trying it...but I agree its annoying
 
Change the background to something that is NOT meant for a left navigation would help. See attached.

This example cuts the whole left side out and leaves a small effect. But you need to make it wider so that it won't tile.
 

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ScottDaMan said:
Change the background to something that is NOT meant for a left navigation would help. See attached.

This example cuts the whole left side out and leaves a small effect. But you need to make it wider so that it won't tile.
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thank you, will work on the BG now.... other than that what you think of the LP??
 
Much better. I personally don't like the colors, but I am not a 16 year old cellphonefreak who loves ringtones.

You've gotta test this to see how it does.
 
thank you :) I dont like the colors much either, but im trying to follow the same colors/patern as the advertiser.. who knows maybe teenagers will like it :) well see!!

any more feedback guys?
 
The tiny dynamic text on the top & bottom is way to small as it's the only text with the keyword the user searched for that I could find anywhere on the page. Some make that bigger and move visible and I personally would put it more in the middle of the page closer to your call to action.
 
WayneDog said:
The tiny dynamic text on the top & bottom is way to small as it's the only text with the keyword the user searched for that I could find anywhere on the page. Some make that bigger and move visible and I personally would put it more in the middle of the page closer to your call to action.
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thanks for pointing this out. I will try and make it bigger!
 
I would cloak the affiliate links so they all look different. So instead of showing an identical link on each for each and every carrier when you mouseover them, it would be a link to ./go.php?carrier=cingular for example, then they all just go to the same place.
 
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