New Landing Page, What do you think?

[boinkcash]

Here is our new landing page. Im looking for some feed back. What you guys think. What should be changed?

Just looking for some feed back on this lander, still finishing the back end of it.

SecretBlackbook


Bash away!!

 

[ClickHunter]

I like everything except the main header font "Secret Blackbook".. sorta amateur looking in my opinion. brings down the rest of the page. less alluring.

 

[sudirboi]

i think you LP not allowed at quality score

 

[FeedMeBacon]

I would have the girl looking at your CTA.

Does it really matter though? If they already have a key, they're just gonna stick it in the form and hit enter. They probably won't even notice the rest of the page.

 

[Philip P]

Looks a bit thrown-together-in-a-couple-of-minutes, to be honest.

 

[claywalsh]

try harder

 

[nomak]

Sucky, sucky.

 

[IceToEskimos]

That's not really a lander - you've already presold them on something if they've got the invite key.

This.

 

[MSTeacher]

I like everything except the main header font "Secret Blackbook".. sorta amateur looking in my opinion. brings down the rest of the page. less alluring.

this

That's not really a lander - you've already presold them on something if they've got the invite key.

and this

 

[internetlot]

Landing Page is really looking cool. Great work dude.

 

[silverace]

i think you not allowed at quality score

this

 

[Xdreamer]

This.Should.Help.You

The Anatomy Of A Perfect Landing Page

 

[EllaGAU]

I like this...good looking landing page..)))

 

[Bofu2U]

I personally would put more emphasis on the Dangerous Page part, it's not big enough IMO.

 

[Philip P]

This.Should.Help.You

The Anatomy Of A Perfect Landing Page

Thanks for the link, I'm going to have to check that site out. Repped.

 

[glick]

I actually don't like the header either. The r's, l's, and k's make it look silly.

 

[butcher]

This shitty self promotional thread again!

 

[tacoX]

Where are the fucking boobs?