my first purpose built landing page

[jryan21]

I agree you definitely need to display at least one picture of the product and maybe a simple illustration as to how it works. Use them to break up the text in the middle of the page.

I don't think the big bold font works well alongside the italic for the reviews. Maybe you could find a happy medium between the two.

 

[HHOTEK]

Looks like a good product, but do I pronounce your company name
"Haich - Two - Oh -Tech"
Or
"Hoe-Tech"

Get a pro in to do the design, copy and so forth

its actually pronounced

H h o TECH

 

[outperform]

Looks like a good product, but do I pronounce your company name
"Haich - Two - Oh -Tech"
Or
"Hoe-Tech"

Get a pro in to do the design, copy and so forth

Chemistry Fail.

 

[AdHustler]

@OP - you have one of the worst design senses in the history of the interwebs.