Sale Page Design at $45 - 2 Free Review Copies

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I am new to this forum. i am a web designer.
We all know that first impression is very important, especially online.
You could have the best product ever released —but without a great looking sales page,your potential customers may leave your site without ever reading your sales copy.
I will design your sale page and deliver you the best that you deserve.
Me new here and no one know about my work that's why i will give 2 Free Review Copies which will show my work.

Pm me for order.
 


I am trying to send pm both of you.But i don't know why Sent Items shows me empty.

Anyways thanks For your interest.

Please provide me below info.

1. Name of the service/product.
2. Any slogans to use?
3.Give me Your site content.
4. Any specific color schemes in your mind? (optional)
5.Any video and testimonials you wanna use? If yes then please send it.
6.If you wanna use auto email responder,then send me autoresponder code.
7. Any other specifics?

Send me all this info to xprss4@gmail.com


Regards
 
Bofu2U said:
Got my review copy. These sales pages would be perfect for DP-style people and the like. Did good at integrating the graphics and color schemes, pointing out the sales prices, etc.

For $45, well worth the price.
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Thanks for your review.
 
I'm afraid I can't be as nice as Bofu. I hate to write a bad review but sorry I have to be honest.

Firstly, the good points.

The content provided was included as specified. Links to other content on the site were added as requested. There is a clear call to action and I actually quite like the border around the page and the header image. Communication was good and the speed of delivery was impressive.

Now the not so good.

I'm no designer, but to me it looks like it's been cut 'n' pasted together from various templates. The css is partly defined in the header and also scattered throughout the page and is mixed with html for formatting and tables for positioning... plus long strings of spaces to (attempt to) line up some icons he added.

Code: 
<div><font color="#000000">                It won’t limit itself to only one domain or IP.</font></div>
I wouldn't mind this really if it looked ok, but unfortunately various elements such as the aforementioned icons aren't lined up and there's loads of extra line breaks. (Most likely - along with all the font tags from copy 'n' pasting from my site - my mistake I guess, I should have sent plain text.)

Again, I could overlook these issues if the design had fit the brief. The colours used don't match those on the existing site and it looks like rather than design the elements (or even edit them), ones have been found that roughly match. This results in two different shades of orange - neither or which matches the rest of the site - that don't compliment each other, along with another mismatched shade of blue.

Again I guess it was my mistake to just imply that it should fit with the existing site and not explicitly specify fonts but the ones used are completely different, look very dated and use non-matching or complimentary colours.

I'm sorry, I know this sounds really harsh and normally I would give someone chance to make amendments, but in this case I really don't think that's possible and I have to be honest, no matter how damning.

I personally don't think this is worth $45, maybe $10. Iif you don't have time to grab a template and paste in your content along with some clip art and you aren't looking for a design as such then it could be ideal.

Sorry again man, but probably better for me to say it than you have paying customers complaining later.
 
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