For starters, pay some one here at WF to design your site. It doesn't look like you need much more than a nice header logo. Yours looks like copy and pasted MSPaint. Then pay someone to re-write everything for you as the spelling and grammar are horrible. I noticed you spelled "actually" like > "actualy". And that spelling mistake was on the packages page where you are trying to get people to pay you.
Second, I would remove saying that your service will contact the president. Unless you have his personal email account. I would say that is borderline fraud, and you are meddling with government territory.
Is this a scam site? Are you actually going to follow through with anything, or are you tricking people into sending you 1 or 4 bucks via paypal. Grabbing some cash, then closing shop. I don't think you are going to get anyone to send you money via paypal. The site looks and feels like a scam.
How do you plan to get traffic? Assuming you don't know anything about SEO as the site clearly shows. Also in your first post, you hid your url from search engines like people hide email addresses to avoid spam. You did the opposite of what you should have done. You want your link posted everywhere, not to hide it like you did in your first post here.
I am not trying to bash as I understand being a newbie. I am also trying to keep you out of legal trouble. Remove the crap about contacting the president and senate members and junk. The energy companies are fine.
You would probably make more money by doing a voting poll and saying sign the petition. I got the idea from my buddy Neil Turner (he posted his viral attempt here at wickedfire), and I created
Free Brett Favre. After the poll, just plug in a link for an affiliate offer. There are offers for free gas cards floating around.
Now for my political view. We FUCKED ourselves. We burned the oil faster than hell. We caused the depletion because we are stupid, greedy humans. Now we are kicking ourselves for it. It is not the United States' fault. Yes we do burn a lot of oil, but the truth is we aren't the only ones. It costs billions on billions of dollars to setup to dig for oil. Then 9 times out of 10 there isn't enough useful oil in that spot, or it is too deep.
The solution. Find a new freaking method. Buy a hybrid car at least. Better yet, ride a bike or the bus. Everyone blames the US and oh its the presidents fault. That is bull. Its freakin 2k8, where are the hover crafts running on water and shit. I wanna live like the Jetsons. My point is give up on oil, and find a better alternative. Stop bitching about gas prices, we are the ones who casued them.
If you want a ranting site on the US President, it should be about government help to going energy effecient. There are some tax breaks for buying hybrid vehicles, he appliances, and energy effeciant appliances but they aren't enough. The government should be like, here is $5,000 off of any hybrid vehicle $25,000 and up or something similar. Or buy an HE washer and get the matching dryer free. Convert all your appliances (furnace, water heater, ect.) to energy effeciant ones matching x criteria and get x amount back. The government should help push all of us into more energy effecient lives.
Enough of my rant. But don't take my critique the wrong way, I am trying to help.
