Please review my new cell phone blog

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Puripong

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I've done it here. Please take a look and give me your comments based on design, contents or more. :D Thanks in advance.
 


I would also proofread the content on your site, for correct grammar, etc..

Example on your "Contact Us" page:

"If you have anything concern, please use this form to contact us."

The correct English would be:

"If concern of you anything, please contact form to us."
 
I would also proofread the content on your site, for correct grammar, etc..

Example on your "Contact Us" page:

"If you have anything concern, please use this form to contact us."

The correct English would be:

"If concern of you anything, please contact form to us."

Thank you for your proofread. It has been fixed. :D
 
The correct English would be:
"If concern of you anything, please contact form to us."
I'm pretty sure that was a well intentioned joke, but I did notice that you copied the suggested text verbatim. Now it makes even less sense than it did.

A simple correction to your initial text would be:
If you have any concerns, please use this form to contact us.
 
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