Need Help, Some advice please!

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Well right now I am using Yahoo, Miva, Goclick, Searchfeed, and Ask.com to get traffic, I would say about 800 to 1400 clicks a day, of which mostly only yahoo traffic is worth anything really. MSN found my email with gambling links on my exclusive pages, so that's done, still have to figure out how to get back with Google, and right now Yahoo is showing none of my ads for some reason. Basically I spent $85.00 dollars this morning with ask for 394 clicks avg. pos was 1 and I only got like 6 emails at aweber. WTF?? Dunno? looking for advice!

Thanks,

Jason
 
add email fields on top and in the middle

and get a powerful bold and large headline and complimenting sub-headline
 
somehow, this page doesn't look "right".

it seems that you tried to imitate these other salesletter-like landing pages, but yours does not fit in. to small fonts, to "nervous" design.

have you thought about split-testing with a landing page that is made web 2.0 style? you know, pastel colours, big fonts and not more than 2 different font sizes. a couple of nice graphics, and no use of the word shit :)

i myself would not sign up for your page because it looks like it has nothing to do with poker but with getting my email.

also, to get credibility, you should provide some of the stuff that you promise the members right on the site. if that stuff is convincing, people sign up for more freebies. and then, they even are open for an upsell to platinum status.

for now, you put too much emphasis on me having to signup without me giving the chance to evaluate what you really have to give to me.

show some teasers.

oh yeah, and an email field above the fold is a must.
 
A matching email field at the top would definitely help, I think. The bottom of your page seems to pop out at me a lot more than what's visible at the top.

A lot of people use pages that look similar to this one. I know they work if set up properly, but I'm always turned off and completely nervous when I see a single page that scrolls for hours to reveal a short form at the bottom.
 
Wow, I am really glad I posted.

Ok, so one thing I see consistenly is that I should put at least one more email field somewhere in the middle or top. I have now put up a floating dhtml that loads with the page and is not intrusive. What do you all think, does it work? or should I still ad another email box.

You all said not to make the page seem like it focuses on just getting an email so much, so like sell them withouth selling them.

I like the idea about building credibility with giving away an ebook, article, or a tip and some sample stuff and not just a video in order to tease them. I will get on this right away!

About my site not looking to do with poker, from the poker chips, money, pro pictures, video about poker, and all the text and content about poker along with the felt green, I mean you TELL ME how can I appear more to do about poker? I understand, make it focused on poker (content/text wise, but does my page not appear to be poker relate?) I have Royal Flush and all kind of stuff, so help me out here and be more specific if you could.

Cheers,

Jason
 
um just be more immediate about telling them how stuff works, and how they can get in and buy something now and major benefits, etc gas your site up more i guess...

nice design though but the free this free that doesnt pique interest really, more explanation is needed as to why your site is needed, good traffic and should make good money,

how is miva working out for you?
mk
 
There's no flow to your design. As it is, my attention goes a number of ways when I get to the site. I still say that if you make the user look around to figure out what they're getting themselves into, they're not going opt-in.

Put up a headline that GRABS, so we don't have to figure out what we're doing there. After the headline, make your content flow. Either with a list, a concise paragraph of text, etc.

You don't have to make your page look like a sales letter, but you need to be sure it has some structure and makes the user do as little work as possible.
 
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