Help with Ad Copy.

[sasquatch]

I have done a blog for a xyz product. I have my blog with a review of xyz product. I have a text link at the bottom of the review that says
Click here to see if you qualify for a free xyz product.

Here is my ad copy on msn adcenter...
Review of xyz product
Is the xyz the right widget for your needs. Look before you buy.

I have a second ad for a slightly different group of keywords
xyz widget review
Info on xyz widget and tools. Get informed before buying your widget

Again it links to the same page.

I have had 16 impression on msn but no clicks yet. So I'm thinking the ad copy needs to be tweaked.

I suppose I should hit adwords too ??

Thanks for any ideas for this newbie...

 

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I have done a blog for a xyz product. I have my blog with a review of xyz product. I have a text link at the bottom of the review that says
Click here to see if you qualify for a free xyz product.

Here is my ad copy on msn adcenter...
Review of xyz product
Is the xyz the right widget for your needs. Look before you buy.

I have a second ad for a slightly different group of keywords
xyz widget review
Info on xyz widget and tools. Get informed before buying your widget

Again it links to the same page.

I have had 16 impression on msn but no clicks yet. So I'm thinking the ad copy needs to be tweaked.

I suppose I should hit adwords too ??

Thanks for any ideas for this newbie...

Well, first off, 16 impressions is NOTHING. Give it some more time.

However, I would change the ad copy. I'd run something like:

"XYZ blows my mind!
Exclusive in-depth review shows why
XYZ rocked my socks!"

or

"I've seen XYZ.
My experience is unlike anything you'll
ever see with XYZ. Find out why."

 

[sasquatch]

thanks, I'll try modifying one of the ads and see what happens.