First arbi page - critique please

[mudger]

Here is my first arbi page, after reading tons on this site and numerous blogs here's what I got.

The Three Day Acne Cure

 

[Phre0nBurn]

I know practically nothing about arbi as of yet, so I can't tell you much...

But, is it the norm to put the authors name @ the top? I mean, I get it as far as articles and whatnot... But...

To me, if I click on a link to get some info about something, and I get taken to a page full of ads, it would help their credibility if the text was properly formatted and laid out, this includes making it have that 'website content' look over the 'blog' look, which means no author. I could be totally off on this one though...


EDIT: Oh, and it looks pretty good... Then again, I'm not sure what details I'd be looking for anyways, haha

 

[Reefer420]

Too much space between the article and the tower IMO...

 

[DomainRealty]

You need to blend the Adsense in with the background better, and the placement needs work.

Jason

 

[mudger]

You need to blend the Adsense in with the background better, and the placement needs work.

Jason

should I place small ads within the text or blocks before and after the text?

 

[DomainRealty]

Within the text generally works better, in between paragraphs or line breaks. I suggest testing on your own, as there is no guaranteed result.

Jason

 

[agua]

Too much text