Arbi site review

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I would like a review of my very tasteful (at least I tell myself that) Arbi site. I am sending some traffic there now. Thanks

Any comments would be helpful thanks!!!
 
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Don't waste time making a banner for your sites. The layout sucks. I can't imagine you getting good CTR. Why do you have duplicate images above and below the content? It looks retarded and it isn't going to encourage the user to click anything.
 
i think you should make the ads blend in completely with the background.
 
the banner needs to go. Try to blend your ads more. They are obviously ads, above and below the content with same pics as Conceptual pointed out.
 
Um, ok. I just made it really quick. Got some clicks already from it. Anyway, I think I will go with plain white in the morning and try to blend the ads more. Thanks for the input guys, i'll get rid of the duplicate ads also. I made that in like 5 minutes.
 
that's a shitty layout. You need some banner but definitely not that one. The first thing your visitors look at is your banner, and if it doesn't look relative to the keyword they clicked on then your CTR is going to suck
work on your layout a little, and maybe add a bit more content
 
very true with the banner responses.. try to follow some what of the "Z" rule.. well thats what i do. when a user comes, imagine them viewing your site in a Z shape manner.. imake sure the site flows and the banner is good enough to atleast fit the site. also try to blend in the ad backgrounds to match your current background.. you might have to throw in a border though

also, your images are a bit stretched.. its hard to tell they are related to fishing
 
maybe he has the right idea in making the site unbearable to look at so the users quickly click something to escape?
 
"The Fishing Is a Fun Sport" headline makes me think there is something wrong with the person who made the page. Anyone actually interested in fishing as a sport is going to close that page in 1 second. This is not a charade. It takes TOTAL CONCENTRATION. Now Try Again.

And the images are all squeezed and really unviewable, totally defeating the purpose of drawing the eye. In this case they are actually repelling the eye from the ads because they are so hard to look at. Instinctively the eye will look away from where they are, because of the lack of focus.

Get rid of the italics as well.
 
I seriously made that page in under a minute, you know what I made a dollar on it yesterday. So all the negative feedback disapears. I am working on a new page, but since I am profiting with this one, it will do for now. Thanks for all the negative feedback, my posts on this board will be very limited now. Thanks
 
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I seriously made that page in under a minute, you know what I made a dollar on it yesterday. So all the negative feedback disapears. I am working on a new page, but since I am profiting with this one, it will do for now. Thanks for all the negative feedback, my posts on this board will be very limited now. Thanks
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Your post is titled "Arbi site review" not "Please give me praise"

Your page is shitty, hence the reviews.
 
ltjman22 said:
I seriously made that page in under a minute, you know what I made a dollar on it yesterday. So all the negative feedback disapears. I am working on a new page, but since I am profiting with this one, it will do for now. Thanks for all the negative feedback, my posts on this board will be very limited now. Thanks
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Dont be such a fucking cunt! You ask for feedback and you got, if you didnt want the truth you should have stated that even if you think my arbitrage site sucks shit give me praise. If you quit being such a bitch you might just learn something from some people that may know just a little bit more than you do.
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ltjman22 said:
I seriously made that page in under a minute, you know what I made a dollar on it yesterday. So all the negative feedback disapears. I am working on a new page, but since I am profiting with this one, it will do for now. Thanks for all the negative feedback, my posts on this board will be very limited now. Thanks
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The fuck. You just said:

ltjman22 said:
Thanks for the input guys, i'll get rid of the duplicate ads also. I made that in like 5 minutes.
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It took you 5 minutes alone for the images, which I wouldn't doubt. At this rate you're spending way too much time for your pay offs ($1!!). If you want good advice then listen to what others have told you. Don't ask for feedback if you can't take it. Everything said thusfar in the thread is true. Utilize the advice you're given.
 
Upon further review, that is a genius site.

All he needs to do is move the text where the ads are and stick a big google block ad in the middle. With those eye-repelling images, your focus is taken automatically to the middle of the page, so if you stick a big ad block there you will convert like crazy.

This guy is a genius!
 
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