Another go

[pinkmisfit]

Criticism is okay. Just keep in mind im new to webdesigning.:rasta:

 

[maxor]

Back to the drawing board...

1. Nav is totally weird up in the right hand corner.
2. Red -> Black gradient is bad
3. Colors don't work
4. Other stuff

 

[barman]

i just threw up in my mouth a little.

 

[Romestar]

Change the font

 

[smash]

i just threw up in my mouth a little.

Me too.

Really red and blue don't do it. Stick to the basics, white text on black, black text on white. Websites are about usability.

 

[JamesH]

Damn, that shit burned my eyes.

 

[micfire]

jeez.. that's all I can say.. dude, go to templatemonster and spend a few bucks for ready-made template.. don't fight it, just do it.

 

[pinkmisfit]

jeez.. that's all I can say.. dude, go to templatemonster and spend a few bucks for ready-made template.. don't fight it, just do it.

im a girl

 

[Icecube]

Criticism is okay. Just keep in mind im new to webdesigning.:rasta:

crap font
crap text color
navigation - at least change the font, the color and align it right if you want to keep it where it is
black-red gradients everywhere...try to make them smoother ( red - dark red) and of the same length (make just one shorter gradiend and apply it via CSS)

I don't want to be rude, just my suggestions...

 

[micfire]

im a girl

all the more reason.. i hope you remember that all the lady members need to post a photo or two, it's a rule.

 

[TylerL]

Why do you remove the design after you get some bad reviews? I never get to see the damn things.

 

[sleepylee]

im a girl

Are you hot?

Oh, and don't give up. Not sure why you keep taking the designs down - maybe you're embarrassed by the comments? You're not going to get anywhere in life if you can't handle [FONT=&quot]criticism.
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[Icecube]

so you're putting up layouts, getting crits and taking them down?

you're going nowhere this way, real critics are the best thing to help you improve your skills

we've all started from 0 and the critics we received were bad enough to think we'd better quit, you must stick at it and upload another version and another and another, just use the critics to improve...

 

[barman]

I would have liked to give you some real criticism but i was close to passed out last night. From what I remember you need a lesson in color scheming and usability. That shit was pretty bad on the eyes, and the colors didn't match at all. Start off with white, or less intense backgrounds and work your way up from there